Treacherous Tracey

I think you can make an interesting story and this is a start but there is  definitely some issues that I wanted to point out as to maybe help you with the game:

* The lighting is very poor/almost useless

*The gameplay is very disorientating and confusing with no map or markers showing where anything might be.

*The dialogue flows awkwardly, it might help if she got a phone call from someone or read a text on her phone instead of the text just showing up on the screen with their dialogue.

*grammar mistakes 

*Random enemies popping up out of nowhere and attacking as you are reading a note.

*Attacking enemies and no  health bar can be frustrating.

*No answer to why there are monsters or what is going on other then the small bit of text we get at the into.

I liked the textures of the beginning of the game and the music, I think the game would be more enjoyable if there was more of a story as to why the character is here or what her motivations are.. Hope this helps with your game! :)

creepy